InfectiousHumanWaste (Model)

-The black on black is a bit difficult to find detail in. Parts of your body are disappearing. Perhaps a lighter costume is required for such dark settings.

-You forgot to light your cigarette. Maybe you're waiting. Maybe that's what the emotion is - "give me a light..!" As a prop I don't feel it is necessary in this image.

+How subtle your emotion is. <3

noahfallis (Photographer)

Would have introduced a rim light to define character from background. Posing wise: legs straight on to camera shorten them. Try getting the model to sit on the edge of the chair so thys aren't squished. No woman likes her thys looking thick.